Thursday, April 09, 2009

Moments

Flippant moments
Intense moments
Shared moments
With hands held
Lonely moments
Wishing for companionship
Lived moments
Unlived moments
Never realised Life just passed by
With those cherished moments
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8 comments:

  1. Amritorupa Kanjilal April 9, 2009 at 12:21 PM

    i hope you don't have too many unlived moments... what a lovely poem to read early in the morning

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  2. AlexisApril 9, 2009 at 8:52 PM

    Excellent poem. You should write more. Simple but thought provoking and elegant.

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  3. AnonymousApril 9, 2009 at 9:59 PM

    And life is the total sum of different moments.
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    Good poem Paresh.

    Write more and share.

    Cheers

    ~Rk

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  4. AnonymousApril 12, 2009 at 8:51 PM

    Liked this!

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  5. AmritaApril 12, 2009 at 9:50 PM

    Good poem Paresh.

    Well expressed thoughts

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  6. Sadasiv SwainApril 13, 2009 at 11:29 PM

    Blemished moments
    Reprimanded moments
    Untrusted moments
    These and many more probably comprised yur "Unlived moments'

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  7. AnonymousApril 14, 2009 at 11:17 PM

    Hi Paresh,
    In the old days they said it was the power of the pen.... I would say now it is the power of the written word...with a pen or typed!!!

    Love the style...You have used "the power of the words really well"

    Keep writing!

    Best wishes,
    SN

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  8. AshApril 21, 2009 at 3:52 PM

    Beautiful, insightful and extremely moving!

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