Thursday, May 07, 2009

I Wish

I wish to hold your cheeks

In the cup of my palms

See sparkling stars in your iris

And convey how precious you are

In a speechless conversation
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20 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 7, 2009 at 10:38 AM

    love love love !

    Good Paresh.

    Carry on more such pieces.

    regards
    Rk

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  2. harimohanMay 7, 2009 at 10:53 AM

    nothing to beat the meaning conveyed in speechless gazes filled with longing
    adequately conveyed by your simple verses kudos paresh

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  3. AlexisMay 7, 2009 at 10:54 AM

    Nice one Paresh. Keep writing. Really beautiful.

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  4. SandeepMay 7, 2009 at 11:42 AM

    Mashallah!... i liked the idea of conveying in a speachless conversation.

    Aankhon he aankhon mein ishara ho gaya....

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  5. AmritaMay 7, 2009 at 10:21 PM

    Wow very romantic....well expressed Paresh.

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  6. UnknownMay 8, 2009 at 1:33 AM

    bitten by love bug,huh paresh? only those who keep some romance in heart could excel in poetry....

    "sardi khaansi na maleriyaa huaa
    main gayaa yaaron mujhko
    love love love
    laveriyaa huaa
    laveriyaa huaa
    laveriyaa huaa"

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  7. Amritorupa Kanjilal May 8, 2009 at 7:29 PM

    speechless conversation... i loved those two words... loaded :)

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  8. Binu KarunakaranMay 9, 2009 at 6:51 PM

    You were speaking about face cheeks. Or were you? Naughty boy

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  9. AnonymousMay 10, 2009 at 10:23 AM

    Hi Paresh,

    It gets better and better ... loved the haiku like crisp short verses full of meaning!!!

    Keep writing....

    Regards, SN

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  10. Thulasy Mary ElizabethMay 13, 2009 at 3:08 AM

    Hi Paresh,
    Got to know about your blog from Alexis site.I read quite a few blogs of you today.Loved it.Keep writing.
    -Thulasy Mary Elizabeth

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  11. AnonymousMay 14, 2009 at 10:57 PM

    Hi Paresh,
    I have Alexis to thank for introducing me to your blog. You experience life with your heart and that reflects in your poetry. That's a gift. Nurture it.
    Would it be alright with you if I borrowed these words?
    All the very best.
    Regards.
    S

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  12. AnonymousMay 18, 2009 at 12:01 AM

    Thank you!
    Take care and have a great week!
    Regards.
    S

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  13. AshMay 23, 2009 at 4:36 AM

    Awww....this is truly precious!

    Aren't speechless conversations sometimes the best ?

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  14. അരുണ്‍ ടി വിജയന്‍May 25, 2009 at 10:55 PM

    brother please receive my silent umma for your speechless conversation.......

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  15. monsoon dreamsMay 27, 2009 at 8:46 PM

    paresh,
    good words.keep writing.

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  16. FlowergirlJuly 6, 2009 at 7:07 AM

    Speechless..
    Wonderful simple phrases to express the most strong passion - love..

    Cheers!

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  17. Shalini GeorgeJuly 22, 2009 at 10:25 PM

    This little poem speaks to my soul....loved it Paresh.

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  18. Anju MenonFebruary 10, 2017 at 1:37 AM

    Beautiful ❤

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  19. wanderlustFebruary 13, 2022 at 10:24 AM

    ♥️♥️

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  20. Harishna May 8, 2022 at 10:21 AM

    ❤️❤️❤️

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