Tuesday, January 19, 2010

Bargain

Let the heart melt with the pain

The soul drench in blood

If it is the only way to repent

And regain lost love

It isn’t an expensive bargain

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11 comments:

  1. niluJanuary 19, 2010 at 12:27 PM

    My heart is melting reading it :)

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  2. Shalini GeorgeJanuary 19, 2010 at 2:53 PM

    gut wrenchin....'soul drenched in blodd'----lovely line.

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  3. A.I.January 19, 2010 at 4:44 PM

    Hmm. Dark. Love is - where there is joy?

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  4. pinkJanuary 19, 2010 at 5:03 PM

    : (
    paro. touched.c

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 19, 2010 at 5:11 PM

    Amen.
    S

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 19, 2010 at 8:49 PM

    Hi,

    You do know how to reach to the depths of one's feelings and literally wrench the guts out!!!

    Great use of words Paresh...keep going!!

    Warm regards, SN

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  7. Vaidya_VaakyaJanuary 21, 2010 at 12:28 AM

    A trade of sorts,
    barter of the hearts.
    One still.....

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  8. PreeJanuary 21, 2010 at 4:28 PM

    Love is painful always?!!! Food for thought....When will be able to love - fearlessly and painlessly???? Very very well written, Paresh!

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  9. QuintJanuary 22, 2010 at 10:20 PM

    Quite right, my friend ... and always do things when it's still time!

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  10. Sadasiv SwainJanuary 27, 2010 at 11:26 AM

    What's this Paresh? Why couldn't I understand what it is?

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  11. TMEFebruary 19, 2010 at 4:06 PM

    I love your short poems always.

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