Thursday, October 14, 2010

Time too had waited

Time too had waited with me

Watching life move on, from a corner.

For you to come along

Hold my palm

And help me continue my journey

10 comments:

  1. Wonderful. I guess each one of us wait for that perfect person to hold our hands and walk with us. I hope you find that someone.

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  2. I like the way you have expressed yourself Paresh. Very meaningful. Very emotional

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  3. Poignant, Paresh dear.

    Now show me that back of yours so that I can pat you real good for these wonderful lines.
    :)

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  4. Thought patterns amazing.Hope you will write more often and come up with a good read for us.Wish & pray that you will find a real good person to share your life and time with.

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  5. Paresh,
    Glad to see you writing.
    Wonderful lines,dear.

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  6. Paresh, nice,sensitive and poignant lines. Keep writing...

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  7. Silently powerful!!!....you have used the power of words very effectively....wishing for your dreams and wishes to come true..and of course..keep writing!!
    SN

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