Saturday, December 01, 2007

Twilight Hour

Tears rolling down your eyes,

Draining the life out of me.

Is it my pain that you share?

Or is it your pent up rage?

A pinch on your cheek with my slender fingers,

Is the only consolation I can give.

A sparkling smile spreads on your lips.

Tears and the smile giving your face the feel of the twilight hour.

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13 comments:

  1. AlexisDecember 1, 2007 at 10:26 AM

    Loved this one...Great...
    You should write more often.

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  2. Dilip MuralidaranDecember 1, 2007 at 12:24 PM

    very lovely paresh, fantastic.

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  3. harimohanDecember 1, 2007 at 9:55 PM

    paresh
    that comes from the soul indeed

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  4. AnonymousDecember 1, 2007 at 11:24 PM

    Thats one of the most heart rending pieces of yours that I have read so far. Its indeed true that u need just a few words to cast a spell...

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  5. monsoon dreamsDecember 2, 2007 at 3:01 AM

    paresh,
    what do i say!am short of words.

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  6. silverineDecember 2, 2007 at 9:50 PM

    That was so touching!!

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  7. nagrathnamDecember 3, 2007 at 11:32 AM

    Kaun hai woh ? Bolo Bolo Kaun hai woh ??

    Meri Jaaaaaan hai woh :-)

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  8. AnonymousDecember 3, 2007 at 4:04 PM

    Paresh,
    wonderful poem, full of emotions and fantastic thing is relationship given in the poem cant be specifically nominated. You have given it universal appeal.

    Keep creating more and more. :)

    Rk

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  9. Paresh PalichaDecember 4, 2007 at 8:27 PM

    AL, Dilip & HM, thanks for the kind words.

    MM: Your appreciation means a lot to me.

    MD: Aha! I'm happy that I was able to silence you once in our not so long friendship.

    Silverine: I'm honored by your visit here, thanks.

    LT: "We're just good friends" ha ha I've got nothing tangible to prove otherwise.

    RK:Thanks, the most challenging being a writer is to connect with the reader. Your comment proves that I've succeeded. Thanks.

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  10. Gastro MalluMarch 8, 2008 at 12:48 PM

    A beautiful work on Emotion!!

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  11. zorbaMarch 19, 2009 at 8:16 PM

    Paresh i wanted to write something. Then on a second thought,i decided to withdraw. The beauty of the poem is the universal appeal as already mentioned

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  12. Martin MorganJanuary 14, 2010 at 7:12 PM

    lovely poetry..

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  13. Anju MenonApril 22, 2017 at 5:05 PM

    Beautiful is an understatement !
    Outstanding is the word to be used , if few words Can make an impact !
    I am Touched , by the souls cry out to the other ��

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