Wednesday, November 19, 2008

A Sad Smile

A Sad Smile
Pleading for mercy
that was hard to come by

A Sad Smile
That extinguished the dew of love
from your lips

A Sad Smile
Memory of which
fills me with guilt and remorse
at

9 comments:

  1. Dilip MuralidaranNovember 20, 2008 at 5:53 AM

    i like it paresh, nice :)

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  2. raufNovember 20, 2008 at 8:37 AM

    Thanks Paresh
    Comes from your heart

    Sadness is a heavy suitcase, with a lot of junk. You can drop it if you want and be light.

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  3. salil chaturvediNovember 20, 2008 at 9:32 AM

    The sad smile has touched me, too. I feel a bit of the sadness and I feel a bit of the smile at the same time.

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  4. monsoon dreamsNovember 20, 2008 at 9:51 AM

    dont be sad,paresh.listen to rauf's advice,drop the junk suitcase(not on someone's head),be happy:-)

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  5. Joselin JohnNovember 20, 2008 at 10:24 AM

    Never underestimate yourself Paresh. It's very good.

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  6. SandeepNovember 20, 2008 at 10:40 AM

    A Sadist indeed... some light on sad shadows...

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  7. harimohanNovember 20, 2008 at 10:54 AM

    paresh
    your sadness is well depicted but i wish and pray you get away from that

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  8. UnknownNovember 20, 2008 at 3:39 PM

    hi, why all this sadness stuff...its time to rejoice we shall be seeing each other so many years yaar!!! anyways on a serious note i did not follow the poem ...can u make it a little simpler...ha,ha,ha

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  9. AnonymousNovember 25, 2008 at 9:03 AM

    Sending just tons of love and tons of hugs your way that would make that grief or what's left of it, merge away into the sunshine out there..

    :D :)

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