Monday, October 05, 2009

Still I…

Invade my sleep
Devastate my dreams
Wrench my heart
Or suffocate my soul
Still I…
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11 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 5, 2009 at 5:17 PM

    Still I.....persevere;
    For I am strong
    I am me!

    Hang in there!!!
    S

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  2. AshOctober 5, 2009 at 6:32 PM

    I held my breath as I read this....

    To say it is brilliant would be an understatement!

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  3. AnonymousOctober 6, 2009 at 12:49 AM

    Still...I love,
    for HE made me
    to give myself,
    to you and to all,
    on whom may misfortune befall.
    I suffer your pain
    while u bask in love.

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  4. Paresh PalichaOctober 6, 2009 at 1:08 AM

    @S, Thanks.

    Ash, I doubt whether I deserve such a flattering comment :-) Thanks.

    Anon, Wow! yours is one of the best response I've got in my life... Thanks.

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  5. Thulasy Mary ElizabethOctober 6, 2009 at 3:03 AM

    Wonders with few words....Top-notch in itsef.....

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  6. joshOctober 6, 2009 at 9:18 AM

    Indeed, man is the only beast that can suffer happily.

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  7. AnonymousOctober 6, 2009 at 11:40 PM

    Thanks Paresh! There are very few who acknowledge. Anon (P)

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  8. niluOctober 7, 2009 at 3:18 AM

    pain drenched words!

    Paro!

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  9. AlexisOctober 7, 2009 at 10:27 PM

    Still I Prevail,
    Still I Achieve,
    Still I Recover,
    Still I Endure,
    Still I Survive,
    And Still I am Happy,
    I am PARESH...

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  10. UnknownOctober 8, 2009 at 10:25 AM

    I know from your eyes, i am far blessed than you...
    I know from your words, that i can do many things than you...

    Still...coz you your "still" i always feel envy of you...

    Pheonix may be a myth but paresh you are real..feel very proud when i say i got friend like paresh....

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  11. Shalini GeorgeOctober 9, 2009 at 2:50 PM

    well crafted. No excess fringes. almost perfect. great work!

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