Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Choked

Heart choked

Not letting any air pass through

Eyes stoned

Not letting out even a tear-drop

Sweat welling up around every pore of the body

Waiting for the soul to let out a cry
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10 comments:

  1. AmritaMay 10, 2011 at 8:10 AM

    I have felt this way too Paresh. Very well expressed

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  2. AlexisMay 10, 2011 at 10:55 AM

    Nice poem Paresh. Very touching and moving...

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  3. MuthuMay 10, 2011 at 4:35 PM

    Paresh, you have just communicated the need of my soul!! Bless you....

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  4. niluMay 11, 2011 at 7:05 AM

    Good poem with sad emotions, written so well paro

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  5. My Thoughts and IMay 12, 2011 at 10:44 PM

    Allow that air to pass through.
    Cry your eyes out.
    Sweat it out,
    And let your soul heal.
    NOW!!!!
    :D
    All is well....

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  6. TMEMay 12, 2011 at 11:42 PM

    Cry it out and deviate your thoughts....Peaceful day to you...!

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  7. AnonymousMay 15, 2011 at 12:32 AM

    Dear Paresh,

    You have used words...subtley and in a measured dose...yet powerfully!!!

    Absolutely great!!

    Keep going...all the best..
    SN

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  8. SMay 16, 2011 at 11:55 PM

    Where did my comment go!!!!
    And it was such a gem too!

    Oh well! Hope you're breathing easy now.
    Stoned huh?...now! now! If you continue in this manner, of course you're gonna be stoned! ;) Kidding!

    On a serious note, do give in to a long cry. While it may not make the problem go away, for some reason it makes things feel a little more bearable!

    Take care.

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  9. TMEMay 17, 2011 at 3:37 AM

    Thanks for the note, Paresh. I was wondering where did my comment go. Happy writing to you...!

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  10. Vaidya_VaakyaMay 21, 2011 at 11:54 AM

    Itne saare pee gaya,
    ek aur ghoont pee ja,
    shayad kisi din
    samandar sookh jaaye.

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