Here I’ll post random things that do not fit in my other blogs.
I wish to hold your cheeks
In the cup of my palms
See sparkling stars in your iris
And convey how precious you are
love love love !Good Paresh.Carry on more such pieces.regardsRk
nothing to beat the meaning conveyed in speechless gazes filled with longing adequately conveyed by your simple verses kudos paresh
Nice one Paresh. Keep writing. Really beautiful.
Mashallah!... i liked the idea of conveying in a speachless conversation.Aankhon he aankhon mein ishara ho gaya....
Wow very romantic....well expressed Paresh.
bitten by love bug,huh paresh? only those who keep some romance in heart could excel in poetry...."sardi khaansi na maleriyaa huaamain gayaa yaaron mujhkolove love lovelaveriyaa huaalaveriyaa huaalaveriyaa huaa"
speechless conversation... i loved those two words... loaded :)
You were speaking about face cheeks. Or were you? Naughty boy
Hi Paresh,It gets better and better ... loved the haiku like crisp short verses full of meaning!!!Keep writing....Regards, SN
Hi Paresh,Got to know about your blog from Alexis site.I read quite a few blogs of you today.Loved it.Keep writing.-Thulasy Mary Elizabeth
Hi Paresh,I have Alexis to thank for introducing me to your blog. You experience life with your heart and that reflects in your poetry. That's a gift. Nurture it.Would it be alright with you if I borrowed these words?All the very best.Regards.S
Thank you!Take care and have a great week!Regards.S
Awww....this is truly precious!Aren't speechless conversations sometimes the best ?
brother please receive my silent umma for your speechless conversation.......
paresh,good words.keep writing.
Speechless.. Wonderful simple phrases to express the most strong passion - love..Cheers!
This little poem speaks to my soul....loved it Paresh.
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