Thursday, May 07, 2009

I Wish

I wish to hold your cheeks

In the cup of my palms

See sparkling stars in your iris

And convey how precious you are

In a speechless conversation

18 comments:

Anonymous said...

love love love !

Good Paresh.

Carry on more such pieces.

regards
Rk

harimohan said...

nothing to beat the meaning conveyed in speechless gazes filled with longing
adequately conveyed by your simple verses kudos paresh

Alexis said...

Nice one Paresh. Keep writing. Really beautiful.

Sandeep said...

Mashallah!... i liked the idea of conveying in a speachless conversation.

Aankhon he aankhon mein ishara ho gaya....

Amrita said...

Wow very romantic....well expressed Paresh.

raj said...

bitten by love bug,huh paresh? only those who keep some romance in heart could excel in poetry....

"sardi khaansi na maleriyaa huaa
main gayaa yaaron mujhko
love love love
laveriyaa huaa
laveriyaa huaa
laveriyaa huaa"

Little Girl Lost said...

speechless conversation... i loved those two words... loaded :)

Binu Karunakaran said...

You were speaking about face cheeks. Or were you? Naughty boy

Anonymous said...

Hi Paresh,

It gets better and better ... loved the haiku like crisp short verses full of meaning!!!

Keep writing....

Regards, SN

Thulasy Mary Elizabeth said...

Hi Paresh,
Got to know about your blog from Alexis site.I read quite a few blogs of you today.Loved it.Keep writing.
-Thulasy Mary Elizabeth

Anonymous said...

Hi Paresh,
I have Alexis to thank for introducing me to your blog. You experience life with your heart and that reflects in your poetry. That's a gift. Nurture it.
Would it be alright with you if I borrowed these words?
All the very best.
Regards.
S

Anonymous said...

Thank you!
Take care and have a great week!
Regards.
S

Ash said...

Awww....this is truly precious!

Aren't speechless conversations sometimes the best ?

arun t vijayan said...

brother please receive my silent umma for your speechless conversation.......

monsoon-dreams said...

paresh,
good words.keep writing.

Flowergirl said...

Speechless..
Wonderful simple phrases to express the most strong passion - love..

Cheers!

Shalini George said...

This little poem speaks to my soul....loved it Paresh.

Eat Pray Love Journey-Anju Menon said...

Beautiful ❤