Monday, October 05, 2009

Still I…

Invade my sleep
Devastate my dreams
Wrench my heart
Or suffocate my soul
Still I…

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

Still I.....persevere;
For I am strong
I am me!

Hang in there!!!
S

Ash said...

I held my breath as I read this....

To say it is brilliant would be an understatement!

Anonymous said...

Still...I love,
for HE made me
to give myself,
to you and to all,
on whom may misfortune befall.
I suffer your pain
while u bask in love.

Paresh Palicha said...

@S, Thanks.

Ash, I doubt whether I deserve such a flattering comment :-) Thanks.

Anon, Wow! yours is one of the best response I've got in my life... Thanks.

Thulasy Mary Elizabeth said...

Wonders with few words....Top-notch in itsef.....

josh said...

Indeed, man is the only beast that can suffer happily.

Anonymous said...

Thanks Paresh! There are very few who acknowledge. Anon (P)

neelima said...

pain drenched words!

Paro!

Alexis said...

Still I Prevail,
Still I Achieve,
Still I Recover,
Still I Endure,
Still I Survive,
And Still I am Happy,
I am PARESH...

SHAH said...

I know from your eyes, i am far blessed than you...
I know from your words, that i can do many things than you...

Still...coz you your "still" i always feel envy of you...

Pheonix may be a myth but paresh you are real..feel very proud when i say i got friend like paresh....

Shalini George said...

well crafted. No excess fringes. almost perfect. great work!