Friday, June 29, 2012

Needed

A guilt free soul

Wings to soar

An unique vision

And, someone to say I love you

in spite of all your flaws

(I didn't feel that this will turn out to be so mushy or trite. The first few lines were reverberating in my head for the last couple of days and the rest happened in the last few hours. Still, I'm happy that it has got a flow).

5 comments:

Ash said...

It's beautiful and succinct. Beautiful. I love it!

( And no - it's not mushy or trite!)

Alexis said...

Nice one. Your ability to convey a lot with a few words is really amazing. Do write more.

Anonymous said...

Paresh... you said it beautifully... in so few words...But, do write more too.. not just a few words - or in brief!! :)

Absolutely well said once again...

SN

Tme said...

Beautiful...

Anita Jose said...

Its beautiful, Paresh.. Simple but depthful..