Draining the life out of me.
Is it my pain that you share?
Or is it your pent up rage?
A pinch on your cheek with my slender fingers,
Is the only consolation I can give.
A sparkling smile spreads on your lips.
Tears and the smile giving your face the feel of the twilight hour.
13 comments:
Loved this one...Great...
You should write more often.
very lovely paresh, fantastic.
paresh
that comes from the soul indeed
Thats one of the most heart rending pieces of yours that I have read so far. Its indeed true that u need just a few words to cast a spell...
paresh,
what do i say!am short of words.
That was so touching!!
Kaun hai woh ? Bolo Bolo Kaun hai woh ??
Meri Jaaaaaan hai woh :-)
Paresh,
wonderful poem, full of emotions and fantastic thing is relationship given in the poem cant be specifically nominated. You have given it universal appeal.
Keep creating more and more. :)
Rk
AL, Dilip & HM, thanks for the kind words.
MM: Your appreciation means a lot to me.
MD: Aha! I'm happy that I was able to silence you once in our not so long friendship.
Silverine: I'm honored by your visit here, thanks.
LT: "We're just good friends" ha ha I've got nothing tangible to prove otherwise.
RK:Thanks, the most challenging being a writer is to connect with the reader. Your comment proves that I've succeeded. Thanks.
A beautiful work on Emotion!!
Paresh i wanted to write something. Then on a second thought,i decided to withdraw. The beauty of the poem is the universal appeal as already mentioned
lovely poetry..
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Beautiful is an understatement !
Outstanding is the word to be used , if few words Can make an impact !
I am Touched , by the souls cry out to the other ��
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